Writing

I really enjoy writing about myself and what I do in the weekend that is why I am sharing my weekend in Napier with you.  This also might be funny, describing or a boring story for you.( look at all the highlight words. They are quality voacabulary)

Something that challenged me the most was putting in funny and describing words and sentences.

Next time I could put my sentences into paragraphs because when you put your writing/work into paragraph it is easier for the reader to read you writing properly instead of having mixed up sentences. 
Paragraphs has its own idea and link together with a another paragraph.

Napier

Sunday 24th July 2016

Waking up at the earliest time 6:45 to a glacial morning I was hoping that it would  be blazing hot later during the day. As I was walking towards my parents room I saw them so awake (not) I actually saw them asleep. Opening the door Mum and Dad popped out of bed and gave me a fright and in the meanwhile my dog Tomas was barking so then my auntie woke up and deliberately went straight back to sleep ( just kidding, who would do that ? ) she yelled “sshhhhh !!!!!!! please get me a drink, so that I can wake up and get ready so that we can go to market and the beach. Dad said that we might be able to go to the waterfall. Leaving the house I started getting boiled because the blistering fan was on. On our way to napier we stopped in to pak’n’save and brought a appetising banana chocolate muffin each. Then we left and went straight to the compassionate(nice) beach and the market. Going past the colossal tall trees I get the feeling that i want ice cream. “Are we there yet” Dennise(My sister)excited said. As dad parked up we ran straight out of the door and went to look for a leash for our dog Tomas so that he could come on to the stoney hard rocks and stones. Walking around the whole market with an tummy that was rumbling and blistered toes I say to my dad “Can we get something to eat” and he replied “shore(sure) we can, what do you want” My little sister quickly said "can we have squillions" ( similar word for million or a made up word) of hot chips, fried rice and hot dogs. As we ( Me my dad and my sister) Walked around looking for our mum, she emerged behind us and the sente(scent) of smell made me quickly grab the plastic cup and ate them (because I was hungry) then we all lumbed(lumbered) to the rocky stony beach. We were passing a table full of things and dad saw a satisfying piece of canvas art. Mum and me brought that and put it straight in the car and got our little puffy poodle half maltese dog Tomas (the dog in the start) I ran straight to the beach and saw an enormous dog that looked very scary. Going past the huge dog it was staring at me like he?she was going to munch! me up. Reaching mum and dad they asked me to get two different types of fizzy drinks so I said “OK”. Walking into a huge crowd of people I try and quickly get past someone and then I finally got the two drinks coke and a grape drink.

Finally getting to mum and dad we all have a sip of each drink and had a kai ( food ) then went straight home. We were going to get and Ice cream but my little sister ruined it for all of us because she didn’t like what we were doing before we go home, But instead we got a 5 liter ice cream with chopped nuts and chocolate icing. We went straight home and had dinner and dessert.        

Thank you for reading my story about my terrifying but fun weekend on the beach and going to the market.