In the past two weeks I have been writing about my birthday which was April 13th. Why I wanted to write about my birthday was because I wanted to share everything that happened and all the information I have.
I really enjoyed writing this story because I already had the information.
Something that challenged was getting all the spelling correct and making all the writing make scene.
Next time I could make sure that everybody that reads this make them get a picture in there head. Sound out the words that are tricky for me to spell.
Thank you for reading my writing about my birthday.
On my birthday we had a big surprise party and everything was blue. There were two cups but one of them were for the drink and the other was filled with lollies. We played games like blind mans bluff. try and get the balloon in the bucket. My mum and dad didn't know that what we were doing until my aunties came over and decorated the shed.
I really enjoyed writing this story because I already had the information.
Something that challenged was getting all the spelling correct and making all the writing make scene.
Next time I could make sure that everybody that reads this make them get a picture in there head. Sound out the words that are tricky for me to spell.
Thank you for reading my writing about my birthday.
On my birthday we had a big surprise party and everything was blue. There were two cups but one of them were for the drink and the other was filled with lollies. We played games like blind mans bluff. try and get the balloon in the bucket. My mum and dad didn't know that what we were doing until my aunties came over and decorated the shed.
